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You begged me to cry.
So I carved your name into my wrist
branded the spots you once kissed
watched records of love that i had missed
just to be laughed at and then dismissed.
But it didn't matter.
So I woke up late into the day
glanced outside to a world now grey
painted beauty with soft dismay
only to watch it melt away.
But then you closed your eyes.
So I closed pain and stopped the care
from breaking my wish coming here
pointed to a heart opened and bare
that experienced love in a view unclear.
But you made it hurt again.
So I dedicated more love to you
nurtured the hurt until it grew
to fall in love with the bluest blue
of despair so deep only more it knew.
But I dug fresh dirt.
So it fell down lower than the lowest low
to never feel Remedy's tender blow
of love so sweet nothing else could show.
The grief lived on with lonliness's glow
But it was satisfied.
So I carved your name into my wrist
branded the spots you once kissed
watched records of love that i had missed
just to be laughed at and then dismissed.
But it didn't matter.
So I woke up late into the day
glanced outside to a world now grey
painted beauty with soft dismay
only to watch it melt away.
But then you closed your eyes.
So I closed pain and stopped the care
from breaking my wish coming here
pointed to a heart opened and bare
that experienced love in a view unclear.
But you made it hurt again.
So I dedicated more love to you
nurtured the hurt until it grew
to fall in love with the bluest blue
of despair so deep only more it knew.
But I dug fresh dirt.
So it fell down lower than the lowest low
to never feel Remedy's tender blow
of love so sweet nothing else could show.
The grief lived on with lonliness's glow
But it was satisfied.
Literature
Wouldn't Have
Imagine what your suicide
Would do to me
And multiply it by a thousand
And you have the exponent.
Think about how I'd be
Without you by my side
What would I be like?
I'd be everything you
Wouldn't want me to be...
My heart would be breaking
Inside my chest
Every second that passed
I knew you wouldn't be there
To hold me close.
I wouldn't have your arms around me
I wouldn't have you to make me laugh
I wouldn't have you
I wouldn't smile
I wouldn't laugh
I wouldn't say "I love you"
I couldn't...
I'd just have a gaping black hole
Where my heart was
That died with you.
Every tear I shed
Would be another word
I wished I'd
Literature
.I.Hate.U.
I hate you
because you're always depressed
and you bring everybody down
I hate you
because you fuck everything up
and noone wants you around
I hate you
because you always get attached
when you know nobody needs you
I hate you
because you're pathetic
now run away and cry,like you always do
I hate you
because you always hurt yourself
and you want someone to care
but if you realized what a joke you are
you'd know why no one's there
I hate you
because you're weak
and you always fall apart
I hate you
because you're stupid
yet you try to act so smart
I hate you
when you smile
'cause like you,it's always fake
I hate you
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The start was a bit shaky, i didnt like the first stanza. But as I continued reading the progression in the piece was well executed. I was impressed with the structure, simple, atheticly pleasing to the eye and well executed. The structure followed the way you delivered the topic, methodical and clear. You stuck to the topic very well at all times and explained the ideas and concepts deeply. Needless to say anymore other than a brilliant piece, my only bone to pick would have to be the first paragraph. It seemed like to me a typical teen agnst stereotype, especialy on the wrist cutting referance. All things considered a minor fault