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Mirror, mirror

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Distorted carnival mirrors and a dream once alive

Spirals of deceit and dreams surround me
confusing with words you once swore true.
Riding on hope like a mode for movement
Taming the lies I wish I could see through.

Sweetly scented samples of lust controlled me
reflected off a mirror tinted to my delight.
Trust was evident and showed naivety in me
I praised the reflection shone with false light.

Too blinded to care to look at limitations
a fogged up reality made it hard to deny.
Tainted visions presented an absent love
I dreamed of good intentions with hopes high.

Dehydrated from tears that wouldn't stay in
Your lips oozed with words that weren't new.
A dream lived within me that you could truly love
it withered and died as I saw the real you.
Objects in mirror aren't really closer than they appear.

This is the other version of [link] "Secret" for you all that already know it. Why did I just now decide to submit it? I don't know lol. It may just go to scraps sometime soon.

Preview, very simple. That's the lovely Jolene which many of you know through the work of Ira, ~Jomina, the picture can be found at .
Starry brushes are from
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winterchild's avatar
another beautiful work... i love it...

"Too blinded to care to look at limitations
a fogged up reality made it hard to deny.
Tainted visions represented you with love that wasn't there
I dreamed your intentions were good with hopes too high."

loved these lines... :+fav: