Ive seen old bits of dragons gold; they lie in your liars lair. And although your neck and hands are dressed, you are still so sadly bare. I have watched your gold turn into glass; the rust reflects my lust. And although I smile as I dance, my heart degrades to dust. I have felt that glass shred soft skin; the blood so red and thin. And although my head is held up high, I am one cast down within. I have felt the pain of a thousand dead; it just cant leave my head. And although I face the physical, its more of what you said. Itll never be the same, she claimed; I cant be what she needs. And although I try so hard for her, shed rather watch me bleed. |
Devious Comments
Great poem! I like how it was written in paragraph form. I haven't seen it done like that before!
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Rawr...
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What's wrong with this world where someone can need steel to feel?
Where death feels more right then life?
Where love falls down on deaf ears?
Where darkness becomes the only safe refuge,
Where light is just a memory.
This was very well written, the pain you have is quite evident.
This is absolutely beautiful.
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this is beyond awesome!!
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This shade of ordinary burns my eyes
simplicity, i despise
in simplicity i'm disguised.
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Stock account: ~Simplicity-Stock
This shade of ordinary burns my eyes
simplicity, i despise
in simplicity i'm disguised.
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Stock account: ~Simplicity-Stock
This shade of ordinary burns my eyes
simplicity, i despise
in simplicity i'm disguised.
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Stock account: ~Simplicity-Stock
This shade of ordinary burns my eyes
simplicity, i despise
in simplicity i'm disguised.
I am quite envious of that. :>
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